I would like opinions on my lyrics PLEASE ( i want lots of feedback) 10 POINTS?

The fact you wrote a complete song that rhymed and fit the whole way through is amazing. I can't do that, no matter how hard it try. Even if I do I end up not liking the song. It was sosososo good. Especially if it had a lil bit of a country twang. I personsly loved it. Keep writing:)